Please read my sonnet and tell me what you think. =)?

Very nice indeed. I must admit when I saw your moniker I was a little dubious about reading the poem, only to find out that it was completley enjoyable and extremely talented. And the first commentary obviously does not know what a sonnet is. You followed the Shakespearean formula to the end, and I found it quite wonderful. I love the line "But my sleepless nights shall reach their end," that has so much meaning in it. The land will finally be allowed to rest. This is a sonnet of hope, of the darkness coming to an end, and I found it beautiful.